It's gorgeous! So much life and radiance and colors

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I shall become the undergrade soon at SVA, perhaps I will see you somewhere. This is one heck of a cool poster.

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whoa, good colours for the background!
very mystical!
i like the faces of the colours too

This is a nice piece. The orb thing is really nice. There is a lot here I would like to critique.

To begin, I find the composition a little confusing. While I think the characters are attacking eachother (and that is how I'm going to appreach this), it also feels like they are both attacking the orb. Which one is going on here?

Also, the left character looks really stiff. The hood/hair on his head doesnt seem to be affected by any forces, where his robe is flailing everywhere. The character doesn't appear to have a very good grip on the nearest sword either, it seems to be slipping out of his hand. Since he is attacking the other guy, I also feel his pose is too vertical for a distant leaping attack. If he was jumping in a very high, but narrow parabola, then it would be a more correct pose.

As for the other guy, I feel he is just really hard to see in general. Whether he is defeding or attacking is also ambiguous due to the composition of the image and the orb. This character is leaning very heavily on his front foot. Such a position would throw him off balance and make it difficult for him to defend any second attack or even make a riposte or counterattack. I would make him stand straighter, with a narrower stance. You also move that arm up, to make him appear more on the offence/defence.

Finally, the claw thing in the background seems a bit mysterious. It looks like part of the ghoul/orc guy, but isnt clearly defined.

If you have any questions about my comments, feel free to PM me.

Awesome...

But Still love the Devil pic of Lucifer...

you're...my hero....

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^__^ That is looking just great dood I love the effects on the shot What are you using to create those thingies? AE? Damn, i really need some good tutorials on it..

dood this is not a higbudget film its a student film, theres like 3 ppl doing this thats it. we cant create somthing ILM or dreamworks can do in half a year. but for that amount of production time this is way off the charts. we havent seen this quality of film created by a small group of ppl in the caliber of game cinematic. we can spend time making each scene perfect but for a 7minute animation for 6 months tweaking is not an option. most of the stuff will be blurry anyways. one thing to remember in 3d film production everyone cheese out, if it looks good its good enough. it all depend on how big the production group. in this case i have to reitterate this to everybody this is a 3 man team group -all students not ppl who has access to industry techniques. actually this is a nobuget film $0 dollars this kids work on this film for 6 months straight 18-20hrs a day. thats how this shiz works its not just creating a single frame like this piece its creating thousands of frames like this.. thats the big picture.

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